So I’ve been busy since I started this challenge last week meeting my daily tasks and learning to relax along the way, especially since I’m back to the day job this week after a few days off for the holidays. This week we’re supposed to spend time perfecting our pitch. First let me say that I’ve had my pitch down for quite a while, so this particular task wasn’t incredibly daunting for me this week, however I’m always looking to keep it current to what’s happening with my music and what I’m putting out there at this point. What’s been a bit of an obsession for me is finding a way to describe my sound in a shorter and shorter fashion each time. Forget 15 seconds for me, how about 15 words…having the kind of day job that I have, I’m not a big fan of long reads…I want the top line and I want to understand everything I need to out of those few seconds you have my attention, so I operate with a slight assumption that not everyone has the time or patience to hear me out. I do have extended descriptions in my bio and in the descriptions of CD’s, but they just expand on what I’m already selling. Enough of that! Let me circle back to the process by which I created my original pitch, using Ariel’s steps.
Step 1 has four parts: Identify what genre(s) you play in, who do other people say you sound like, who are your influences, and what are the feelings/vibes you want to convey with your music.
Genre:
This is pretty easy for me. I write and play rock/modern rock. I am labeled as a singer-songwriter because I am one with a rock band sound. My first album was more pop-rock than straight up rock, but as I’ve grown and pushed for the sound I want, I’ve landed more firmly on the rock platform. When you say I play rock music, that leaves the area wide open to interpretation, so I define my rock music by two things: the style and the guitar sound. For the current album we are promoting, I Wish I Was Alive, we defined the writing style as alt/modern rock and the guitar sound as having old school [rock] bite. (Spoiler: if you check out the link to the CD description you see that we have an extended version of our 15 second pitch used as the CD description.)
Artists Others say you sound like
This one has been the worst. I have never had one person agree on who I sound like, but when I started applying the principals myself in order to figure out how to market my music, I was able to come up with sounds-likes for my songs that landed me on sounds-likes for the album overall. I say album, because the difference between albums 1 and 2 were big and it was obvious that I expanded on the sound I wanted instead of playing it safe as I grew in my songwriting. Therefore we (my musicians and my producers and my other songwriting friends) have landed on artists based on my vocal sound and range, my songwriting style and my guitar sound. For album #2 it’s best put as something like this: Sounds like 3EB, Weezer, Van Halen, with vocals a la Pat Benetar, Annie Lennox, Shirley Manson (Garbage), Sheryl Crow.
Influences
Ultimately, my influences are just about anything and everything I hear, but there are several that are always in my arsenal of go-to artists like Third Eye Blind, U2, Van Halen, Nickelback, Theory of a Deadman, Bryan Adams, Garbage, Jonatha Brooke, etc…it’s always been a wide range and it’s not necessarily that I sound like them, but there’s a flavor from each that lingers when I do write. In album #2, the ones that lingered most were Third Eye Blind and Jonatha Brooke for story-telling thoughts, Van Halen and Third Eye Blind again for guitar style/sound and Weezer based on a similar sense of humor, thus their use in the description of sounds like noted above.
What are the feelings you want to convey
I have a hard time including this in my pitch because I touch on a range of emotion in the album that I’ve had a hard time defining. I use a line in my bio that says “I Wish I Was Alive is a killer Rock album that drives from beginning to end with raw emotion and no apologies” and I think that definitely describes the album. It’s raw, I make no apologies for what I’ve said and it drives.
Because I’ve already had this pitch in place for a while, I didn’t need to run it through 15secondpitch.com, as Ariel suggests, to help define the boundaries, but as I mentioned earlier I have been mulling it over for a long time now (months) trying to figure out what the shortest delivery method is to make the point of what it sounds like and what they can expect. I use my current pitch regularly in press kits, on my website, on my facebook and myspace pages and to describe myself to anyone who asks, so here’s where I decided to challenge myself a bit more. As I’m preparing to write album number three and I get ready to narrow down the description of what everyone can expect I’m trying to keep what’s not changing and add more definite terms and boundaries to describe what the album will sound like when they play it. Based on all of the above, here’s where my pitch falls for now:
With a voice to rival the depth and range of legends like Pat Benetar, and Ann Wilson and musical cues from the likes of Weezer, Third Eye Blind and Van Halen, Kelly Greene delivers modern rock that drives from beginning to end with raw emotion and no apologies.
…and even though I think this is a step ahead of where I stand for now, it’s where I believe I will end up as we work through then next CD: Kelly Greene is driven modern rock with old school bite; Benetar range over Nickelback grit.
On that note, I’ll tell you to go have a listen and see what you think you hear on either album, but especially I Wish I Was Alive at KellyGreene.com
January 7, 2010
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